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Transcript: Introduction: Talk: Based on unit 4-A "living in fear" Class Project: Based on inicial practicum in pre-school Final conclusion Oct 2010 - Jun 2011 Ideas: Story Board 3 Estas son algunas cosas importantes que hice para esta compañía. The Desk of Identity.... by Julia Leonard Honors Chemistry Hour 6 - A place with no loud distractions - talking, clanging - headphones - Plenty of ideas to start a piece -writer's landscape - Freedom to write however I want -short and sweet -poetic -etc. - Plenty of ways to edit and revise so I don't have to share my work Structure: Estas son algunas cosas importantes que hice para esta compañía. What I need most as a writer Ideas: Story Board 2 Black widow spider I see myself as a writer who wants to keep writing, even if I continue to write about the same thing over and over again. I tend to stick to the same format and layout, shorter more poetic pieces, and I also see myself as a writer who wants to try something new. But I don't think I 'll ever like sharing my work. Today I decided on the topic for my memoir even though I ended up changing it after looking through my writer's landscape. Along with the writer's landscape I did a couple of top ten lists, including "Top 10 things I hate," a random autobiography and the 55 word story. My memoir was coming along really well. Today I had five pages completed. I figured out a way to make everything connect, (for now) but when I edit and revise it will most likely change. In my writing I use a lot of sentence variation and repetition because I feel like those techniques work well with a more poetic structure. The section "Ethnics in a writer's life" has helped me a lot. I will not be here for Day 5. Black widow spider -Advanced competenced in english I -Applied linguistic -Metodologia de ingles para la ed. pre-escolar -Politicas y estrategias curriculares -Practica Inicial I 3 Blind Mice Conclusion On day 6 (Monday) we mapped our memoirs out in chunks. Since mine is more poetic and in sections, it was a bit more difficult, but I figured it out. I divided it into the individual sections and then mapped it as a whole. Posición Posición Posición How I See Myself as a Writer Then I arranged each piece in the order that worked best. The visual representation definitely helped me see my piece and how it was going to work and flow together as on large memoir with a series of memories . Ideas: Story Board 1 Oct 2010 - Jun 2011 Oct 2010 - June 2011 Day 6 Day 3 Oct 2010 - June 2011 Day 7 and 8 We did A LOT of editing and revising including: reordering, cutting, adding, replacing, etc. We also mapped out our memoirs with our groups which helped me figure out the main theme and how to improve my piece. This definitely helped me even though I prefer to work alone. Brown recluse spider Oct 2010 - June 2011 Day 1 Tarantula self-assessment: Randee #1 Jennifer #2 Makena #3 Class Project Estas son algunas cosas importantes que hice para esta compañía. I took each individual section and drew a picture, representing each part of my memoir. Day 4 Posición Tarantula Oct 2010 - June 2011 Estas son algunas cosas importantes que hice para esta compañía. Estas son algunas cosas importantes que hice para esta compañía. Brown recluse spider Posición I used a lot of editing and revising techniques today and I also found a better way to organize my memoir so it makes sense. It was still a bit choppy but it's getting there. We figured out the problem and the resolution for our memoirs. My problem was I didn't have a problem, it was all just memories so I had to figure out how to fix that. We also story boarded our pieces. Estas son algunas cosas importantes que hice para esta compañía. Notes Class Project Posición We did a couple of quick writes and then Becky Rule came, when we did the quick write I liked being able to tell who wrote which sentences. I have three pages done in my memoir, but I'm not very good at sustaining one topic for longer than three pages so I decided that a couple of shorter pieces were the way to go.